Cruel

Cruel, cries the Mind
As it struggles with the pain,
Inflicted so mercilessly,
Thinks the Mind,
In its moment of respite
In mindless bitter gain.
The Body screams in protest,
When the mind bends again
Cruel, it cries in agony
And succumbs as well,
Locked bodily in its hell.
The Heart was resilient,
So it was just a whisper-
Cruel, the Heart says
Just with a trace
Of its breaking faith-
A breaking heart
Just before it splinters
Into a thousand shards!
But the Soul remained silent,
Unmoving, yet vigilant
A soft murmur, an utter 
Against the wind,
I understand, it says
And I forgive your sin.
You can hurt my brothers,
But never touch their soul
Cruel, you may be-
But I have my peace
We will have our escape
For you, there won’t be any.
Cruel, it said sadly
As it flew yonder away.
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About Guria

An Artist in Science: A Misfit 'cause I choose to be one. "Whenever you find that you are on the side of the majority, it is time to reform" And a Maverick, because, I'm... umm... brilliant?
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12 Responses to Cruel

  1. Unknown's avatar Raji U says:

    Wow!!!

    I understand, it says
    And I forgive your sin.
    You can hurt my brothers,
    But never touch their soul

    Hurts.. spell-bound..!!

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  2. Unknown's avatar Maverick says:

    Beautiful…loved the flow of emotions…the intricate adherence to the central theme is wonderful…

    Loved it! 🙂

    Keep writing…tc!

    Gaurav

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  3. Unknown's avatar Gyanban says:

    nice few lines there.the underlying message is beautifully woven,almost like a sinusoidal curve of emotions.
    enjoyed reading.

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  4. nice flow… liked it 🙂

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  5. Unknown's avatar Harini says:

    Ahh! Its beautiful, like always :).

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  6. Unknown's avatar Nethra says:

    Very nice flow. Beautiful. 🙂

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  7. Unknown's avatar Rajlakshmi says:

    very deep and strong write… well written…

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  8. Unknown's avatar BK Chowla, says:

    Very nice and crisp.

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  9. A breaking heart-
    Just before it splinters
    Into a thousand shards!

    there were noises … loud ones

    wonderful!

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  10. Unknown's avatar Chatterbox says:

    Wonderful play with words 🙂

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