55 Fiction #4

If there is one thing I’m terribly awful at, that’s a 55-er… How much ever I enjoy them, for the life of me, I can’t write one. This is for none of those who enjoy 55-ers, but my own feeble attempt at consoling myself!

———-Family Woes———-

He had to leave town, and with his family. He didn’t know where he’d go but somewhere where his respectability wouldn’t be questioned, for sure!

“Damn it, Dad. Why did you have to do it to me?”

He had had done enough explaining why his wife was his grandmother, and his step-daughter, his step-mother!
Word Count: 54 (:P)

About Guria

An Artist in Science: A Misfit 'cause I choose to be one. "Whenever you find that you are on the side of the majority, it is time to reform" And a Maverick, because, I'm... umm... brilliant?
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18 Responses to 55 Fiction #4

  1. Kay says:

    what a predicament! haha


  2. Phoenixritu says:

    Oh okay, I finally managed to work this one out – convoluted


  3. Shilpa Garg says:

    Oh…twisted relationship!! Gosh… what woes!!


  4. Gyanban says:

    This is exactly why bold n beautiful was created.


  5. Harini says:

    hahahaha! Twisted!


  6. Bikramjit says:

    Blyme.. blimey I am still trying to get it sorted.. I give up

    Really twisted this one… and you saying this is a mere attempt I dont beleiv it 🙂

    well its EXCELLENT… 🙂


  7. Roshmi Sinha says:

    I'm still trying to figure this out… *scratching my head*


  8. Neha says:

    why attempt then? I like your 555ers or longer (the better) more!


  9. Twist in the tale.. its like zor ka jhatka dheere se laga..:)

    Nice narration..


  10. haha! funny! such a complicated life!

    he is his own grampa!


  11. Rajlakshmi says:

    hahahaha reminds me of a mail i received long time time 😀
    what a situation 😛


  12. Queen of twists u are trulyyyy…


  13. wow – you sure can do great stuff within limits


  14. lol… i liked it… it was a very good attempt..but yes, the longer stories u write are much better… and its the same case with me, I like the freedom to write a post that's not got a word limit on it… 🙂



  15. Karthik says:

    Aaaiinng??!! :O :O
    *scratches head*


  16. Durga says:

    sounds like my friends love .. he has ended up loving a girl who in relation is his daughter 😛


  17. Insignia says:

    😛 Poor him. Thats a real twist. Scratched my head for a while 😛


  18. Nethra says:

    It should have been family incest instead then people would have understood the story better.


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