You and Little Thoughts

_________
Crude yet simple
No complications, no strife
A new page, a new leaf
A newly discovered life…
_________
A little of a lot
Or a lot of a little
Wanting never ceases
Nor the need goes
Can feel the shivers spreading
From my heart to my toes…
_________
My mind barely agrees
The heart rarely relents
But they never argue
When I dream about you…
_________
I dream with closed eyes
I fantasize with them open
And you didn’t reach them
But surpassed, and deepen…
_________
N.B. Figments of my thoughts as I dreamed when I was supposed to be working… With love. 
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About Guria

An Artist in Science - I am a Misfit 'cause I choose to be one. "Whenever you find that you are on the side of the majority, it is time to reform" And I am a Maverick, because, I'm... umm... brilliant?
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11 Responses to You and Little Thoughts

  1. Rashmi says:

    Very very nice indeed!
    Cheers woman 🙂

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  2. Rajlakshmi says:

    those are beautiful lines… 🙂
    well penned.

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  3. Neha says:

    since I now how you penned those down; I request you to carry a pen and _____________ paper wherever you go…multi purpose tool 😛

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  4. this is the first piece of poetry I have read on ur blog and I really liked it… keep up the good work. 🙂

    Cheers!
    Tavish

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  5. BK Chowla, says:

    I am not a great one in understanding poetry.
    But, good ones like this one–well done.

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  6. cheers!
    very nice indeed!

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  7. Aditya says:

    Wonderful!

    //A little of a lot
    Or a lot of a little//

    These lines beautifully compliment your next two lines about wants and needs! I really wonder how you thought of such lines, that too while working (supposedly :P)

    The battle between mind and heart is the toughest battle of mankind! I, personally would choose mind over heart but I also agree, heart is a tremendous fighter! 🙂

    Good poem!

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  8. Guria says:

    @Rashmi: Thanks! good to have you back in here! :))

    @Rajlakshmi: Thank you dear! Words from my heart is all I can say… :))

    @Sid aka Ravan: sukriya… sukriya… sukriya… 😀

    @Neha: Aaargh girl!! Did you have to insinuate that in here!! 😀

    @Tavish: First poetry? I have several samples of terribly bad work in here! You absolutely should read them! 😛
    Thanks buddy!! :))

    @BK Chowla: Thank you so much Sir! High praise for me! I'm not much of a poet either… 🙂

    @Diwakar: Welcome and Thanks! 🙂

    @Aditya: You latched on to the lines that surprised even me! 😀
    As for heart and mind, I listen to my heart except you probably know it by its other name, 'instinct'… :))
    Thanks buddy! It's so good to see you in here frequently! :))

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  9. Nethra says:

    Hey, it was very…very…nice. I kept reading it again and again. 🙂

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  10. Guria says:

    @Nethra: That is the sweetest thing you could say! Thank you! 🙂

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