You and Little Thoughts

Crude yet simple
No complications, no strife
A new page, a new leaf
A newly discovered life…
A little of a lot
Or a lot of a little
Wanting never ceases
Nor the need goes
Can feel the shivers spreading
From my heart to my toes…
My mind barely agrees
The heart rarely relents
But they never argue
When I dream about you…
I dream with closed eyes
I fantasize with them open
And you didn’t reach them
But surpassed, and deepen…
N.B. Figments of my thoughts as I dreamed when I was supposed to be working… With love.Β 

About Guria

An Artist in Science: A Misfit 'cause I choose to be one. "Whenever you find that you are on the side of the majority, it is time to reform" And a Maverick, because, I'm... umm... brilliant?
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11 Responses to You and Little Thoughts

  1. Rashmi says:

    Very very nice indeed!
    Cheers woman πŸ™‚


  2. Rajlakshmi says:

    those are beautiful lines… πŸ™‚
    well penned.


  3. Neha says:

    since I now how you penned those down; I request you to carry a pen and _____________ paper wherever you go…multi purpose tool πŸ˜›


  4. this is the first piece of poetry I have read on ur blog and I really liked it… keep up the good work. πŸ™‚



  5. BK Chowla, says:

    I am not a great one in understanding poetry.
    But, good ones like this one–well done.


  6. cheers!
    very nice indeed!


  7. Aditya says:


    //A little of a lot
    Or a lot of a little//

    These lines beautifully compliment your next two lines about wants and needs! I really wonder how you thought of such lines, that too while working (supposedly :P)

    The battle between mind and heart is the toughest battle of mankind! I, personally would choose mind over heart but I also agree, heart is a tremendous fighter! πŸ™‚

    Good poem!


  8. Guria says:

    @Rashmi: Thanks! good to have you back in here! :))

    @Rajlakshmi: Thank you dear! Words from my heart is all I can say… :))

    @Sid aka Ravan: sukriya… sukriya… sukriya… πŸ˜€

    @Neha: Aaargh girl!! Did you have to insinuate that in here!! πŸ˜€

    @Tavish: First poetry? I have several samples of terribly bad work in here! You absolutely should read them! πŸ˜›
    Thanks buddy!! :))

    @BK Chowla: Thank you so much Sir! High praise for me! I'm not much of a poet either… πŸ™‚

    @Diwakar: Welcome and Thanks! πŸ™‚

    @Aditya: You latched on to the lines that surprised even me! πŸ˜€
    As for heart and mind, I listen to my heart except you probably know it by its other name, 'instinct'… :))
    Thanks buddy! It's so good to see you in here frequently! :))


  9. Nethra says:

    Hey, it was very…very…nice. I kept reading it again and again. πŸ™‚


  10. Guria says:

    @Nethra: That is the sweetest thing you could say! Thank you! πŸ™‚


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