_________
Crude yet simple
No complications, no strife
A new page, a new leaf
A newly discovered life…
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A little of a lot
Crude yet simple
No complications, no strife
A new page, a new leaf
A newly discovered life…
_________
A little of a lot
Or a lot of a little
Wanting never ceases
Nor the need goes
Can feel the shivers spreading
From my heart to my toes…
_________
My mind barely agrees
The heart rarely relents
But they never argue
When I dream about you…
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I dream with closed eyes
I fantasize with them open
And you didn’t reach them
But surpassed, and deepen…
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N.B. Figments of my thoughts as I dreamed when I was supposed to be working… With love.
Maverick Misfit 
Very very nice indeed!
Cheers woman 🙂
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those are beautiful lines… 🙂
well penned.
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wah wah wah….:D
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since I now how you penned those down; I request you to carry a pen and _____________ paper wherever you go…multi purpose tool 😛
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this is the first piece of poetry I have read on ur blog and I really liked it… keep up the good work. 🙂
Cheers!
Tavish
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I am not a great one in understanding poetry.
But, good ones like this one–well done.
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cheers!
very nice indeed!
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Wonderful!
//A little of a lot
Or a lot of a little//
These lines beautifully compliment your next two lines about wants and needs! I really wonder how you thought of such lines, that too while working (supposedly :P)
The battle between mind and heart is the toughest battle of mankind! I, personally would choose mind over heart but I also agree, heart is a tremendous fighter! 🙂
Good poem!
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@Rashmi: Thanks! good to have you back in here! :))
@Rajlakshmi: Thank you dear! Words from my heart is all I can say… :))
@Sid aka Ravan: sukriya… sukriya… sukriya… 😀
@Neha: Aaargh girl!! Did you have to insinuate that in here!! 😀
@Tavish: First poetry? I have several samples of terribly bad work in here! You absolutely should read them! 😛
Thanks buddy!! :))
@BK Chowla: Thank you so much Sir! High praise for me! I'm not much of a poet either… 🙂
@Diwakar: Welcome and Thanks! 🙂
@Aditya: You latched on to the lines that surprised even me! 😀
As for heart and mind, I listen to my heart except you probably know it by its other name, 'instinct'… :))
Thanks buddy! It's so good to see you in here frequently! :))
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Hey, it was very…very…nice. I kept reading it again and again. 🙂
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@Nethra: That is the sweetest thing you could say! Thank you! 🙂
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