Would you gloat if you knew I am susceptible, vulnerable?
Would you hit knowing that I would never have the guts to hit back?
Would you shout and wail, manipulate and ask straight to give up and surrender all that I collected over my life, if you knew that I would hold nothing back?
Would you want every drop of my blood, every water particle to escape as sweat, every breath till it came no more, when I’d give them up, all for your taking?
Would you stop if I called out to you?
Would you let me run just because I needed to run away?
Would you just forget, if I died?
Would you bask in glee, be cruel and merciless, if you knew that I have fallen, fallen beyond realms of gather, that I have fallen in the trap of deceit laid by my tormentor?
I would.
Guria - The Misfit Girl™
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High five! 😀
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wow….now dats a shocker!!!
It started off similar to a mind questionin da veracity of sum1….der commitment to a cause….
nd den…WHAM!!!! it ends on such a high brutal note!!!!
piece of art! 🙂
tc!
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Would you?
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I would do any thing which pleases yo and doesn't hurt you.
Would you?
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you would?
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aah, the comments remind me of the song by Touch and Go – would you 😛
amazing lines G..hats off to your imagination 🙂
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Gosh!! I read a news which made me wonder at some people who won't know what answer to give –
http://www.mid-day.com/news/2010/jun/170610-Delhi-dowry-death-suicide-marriage.htm
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THIS IS A WORK OF CREATIVITY, SHEER IMAGINATION.
It's a portrayal of the way some people feel bad when someone else hurts them, yet they themselves hurt the other when they have the same weapon to wield. This is a blatant, naked reflection of what really is, how some people really are or can be. My experience.
And if you ask me… No, I would not. Because the power to, when given freely, when given with love is a treasure, an honour for me.
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Human beings do have a cruel streak in them…they are capable of being ruthless..
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A fine portrayal of the human psyche. I think the “I would” created the desired impact.
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its like that song by enrique would you cry if you saw m crying… etc etc etc… just that its in the negative tone… hehe
yeah from ur comment above ui agree we are all hypocrites here… khud dard nahi sahe sakte lekin doosron ko dard dene mein bohot maza ata hai… 😛
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@Karthik: 😉
@Mav: Ahh, you got it, didn't ya! :))
@aativas: What do you think? :))
@BK Chowla: I would too… 🙂
@Harini: You think? :))
@Neha: My saviour! 😀 :*
@IM: I understand….
@LP: That's what I see… and am saddened by, sometimes…
@RGB: Thank you! I think you caught the nuance perfectly. And thanks for the follow! :))
@Tavish: Yeah! 😛 :))
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!!
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anytime :* ❤
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@Sourav: ^_^
Nehaaaa, I love youuuu!!! 😀
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Killer punchline. Well, actually cruelty is a very relative idea, varying wildly, so is punishment and revenge. It is equally foolish to let a person live knowing s/he does not have anything to contribute to humanity as it is for the surgeon to worry about the pain while performing the incision.
And I agree, power gained through trust is very delicate and abusing it is simply not honourable.
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