In a Blink of an Eye

the day seems short
the night even more so
is it ’cause I’m leaving
that the time won’t slow
i have to leave
in just another day
away from you
a way I cannot stay
hold on to me
i want to be
back in no time
and everything will be
again dandy and fine
give me your words
and your thoughts
I’ll remember and I’ll hold
always more precious than gold.


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About Guria

An Artist in Science: A Misfit 'cause I choose to be one. "Whenever you find that you are on the side of the majority, it is time to reform" And a Maverick, because, I'm... umm... brilliant?
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15 Responses to In a Blink of an Eye

  1. rimz says:

    well written
    happy cre..:)


  2. Aditya says:

    Ah what a beautiful poem. Very well written.Its soo sweet! πŸ™‚


  3. HaRy!! says:

    miss yu cannot be put in a better way!! real sweet one!


  4. Yellow Tulip says:

    beautifully said dear..:)..take care:)


  5. Neha says:

    I have only one thing to say – WOW..


  6. pra says:

    That is a really nice poem. Short and sweet!


  7. Kay says:

    swoon and sigh, so dear and sweet


  8. *uncorked says:

    Left you a little something over at my blog πŸ™‚


  9. Sourav !!! says:

    Will see you around the time when it snows in December till then will just try to be away !

    Don't know how n why that line came to me, but I suppose it's your words, which left a hangover !

    Following you now .. would love you in my blog too … πŸ™‚

    P.S. Be a regular reader, and I assure you honest reads too ! πŸ™‚

    Sourav…in love with me and life

    Take care πŸ™‚


  10. Saad Shaikh says:

    beautiful.. πŸ™‚

    loved every word.. it couldn't have been put in a better way..

    good one.. πŸ™‚


  11. Shruti says:

    hey sreya!
    You are quite a poetess!! Its so sweet!

    Check out my recent post!


  12. Shruti says:

    hey really sweet one sreya!
    Very well written!!


  13. Guria says:

    To Everyone !!

    I'm sorry I couldn't reply sooner, it's just that I went out of town, as so eloquently put by my words! Thanks so much for your sweet words, they do mean a lot to me! πŸ™‚

    Love, Sreya


  14. Maverick says:

    beautiful….its more so coz its concise nd smart….kinda lik a small gift wrapped box wid a small opening where u can jst see a bit of wats inside….makes u want more…want to get dat box open..!

    Dis poem's lik dat…conveys its message nd makes me feel dat if i talk to da poet (poetess in dis case) i cld just b mesmerized by her rambling on about her experience…!

    *Do I even make sense!!!! gotta stop dis! πŸ˜› πŸ˜› :P*

    end of discussion! luvd dis one! Period! πŸ™‚


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