To rise after a fall is the greatest thing of all. Unearth that spirit and go wild. Rediscover. Recreate. Reincarnate.
Be a Phoenix.
The heat cannot burn me
The cold cannot freeze me
Ascended above all
Finally did I learn
To rise and high after every fall
Known my worth
Whether others know or not
Known I am big
Stand upright and proud
And stand out always in a crowd
It is me as I’ve never known
But one that existed in me
Dragged up by love, faith and will
To survive without fear, and feel
I’m turning over a new leaf
A new Me, not just to exist, but Live.
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Maverick Misfit 
“It is me as I've never known
But one that existed in me
Dragged up by love, faith and will
To survive without fear, and feel.. “
Wonderful lines. sometimes situations do bring out the unexpected in us. And its bizarre how things work out.
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ok since you seek criticism (lol..) i have this for you…
i suggest you to re-write this without all those hymes..and you wil l understand yourself…perfect poetry neednt be perfectly rhyming..
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u write amazing poems re…quite liked all I have read so far…
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