I am blind to the world.
I am blind to the light.
I am blind to humankind,
With passion glowing bright.
There’s a darkness alive
Resentful and stubborn,
Wanting the light more
Than it could let borne.
Shying away in anonymity
Shunning away, away from pity,
Travels through lone corners
And lanes turned gritty-
It stays blind and unseeing,
Rude, scared and mulishly unfeeling.
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N.B. Another piece of my talents that spewed onto a certain kind of paper while I was supposed to be working but was actually feeling sleepy! G.:)
Maverick Misfit 
“Abright” by design or default ??
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Are we all not blind?…for convenience?
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Nice. You write such complex poems that my small brain finds it so hard to deciper its meaning
😐
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quite rational and objective 🙂
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well they say good stuff comes to mind only when you harley expect it .. SO i guess you shud try writing when you are feeling sleepy 🙂 he he he
Nice work
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I am gonna try and write a poem when i m sleepy too.
A very deep and rational one
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thats a very deep write… blind… not by nature but maybe by cicumstances…
wonderful write..
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HI
I just found your blog through IP's-i like the poetry. I write a litte myself and mostly it is exactly like what you describe-the poem sorta sits and gestates inside then tosses itself onto the page-i like this one a lot. Looking forward to reading more.
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Nice write!!!!! likd da way u hav dealt with and described the subject in the form of a living breathng entity and lovd da adjectives dat describe its traits….awesome work! 🙂
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Blinding thought…
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We choose to be blind many times.. because what we see with open eyes is difficult to live with.
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HEY..u said BLIND, but it was actually an eyeopener kind of stuff.. superbly done, and enjoyed the morals..
U were soo sincere @ ur PS.. hehe..good yar.
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Fantastic 🙂
You create magic with words 🙂
Keep up the good work.
Cheers!!
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@Gyanban: Whaddya think?
@Nalini: Point. But isn't that a fear?
@Mahesh: Thanks! :))
@Aditya: Translated: I don't yunderstand a word you wrote! 😀
No problem, poetry is after all something that holds different meaning for different people!! 😛
@Bikram: Yeah, I agree there! Didn't know I had poetry in me ,of all things! 😀
@Harini: And of course, that sleepy has to be when you have work to do! 😛 :))
@Rajlakshmi: You got it absolutely. And I believe, by fear… :))
@tadd: Hi there! I know you, I have seen on IP's many a times! Welcome to MM… glad to have you here! Looking forward to you reading more! Thanks! :))
@Maverick: As I say, one of the best poets around and he says my work is awesome… and I'm afloat! 😀
Thanks!
@Shas: Thanks! 🙂
@aativas: Or maybe even scared to see the good, in fear.
@pramoda: Thank you so moch girl! 🙂
@Chatterbox: Thank you so much! :))
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Found your blog through Indi.
Beautiful poem.
I do believe we're all blind and we never 'see' as much as we try to.
Really well written. 🙂
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A moving poem… with deep meanings.
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nice sonnet.
yeah passion is some like that.
but sometimes its the light which blinds. darkness is convenient.
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nice one hear my gadget speak
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Love the way you play with words. Good stuff. Cheers!
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i will surely visit again
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Cheers and Keep Writing,
God Bless
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