Walking in the rains…

I was walking in the rain. 
With the little drops of water 
Pinpricks of salvation 
On my upturned face 
The wind roared and raged 
Like a lover’s hand 
Through my hair, caressing. 
And inexplicably, or naturally? 
I thought of you, remembering 
Your lips as they smiled against mine 
That last time you’d held me 
Loved me, cherished me 
Made me feel. 
And my lips curved in a smile, 
Wet, warm and wanting 
Lost in a time left far behind 
Oblivious to the rain. 
Moments before the pain set in.

About Guria

An Artist in Science: A Misfit 'cause I choose to be one. "Whenever you find that you are on the side of the majority, it is time to reform" And a Maverick, because, I'm... umm... brilliant?
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12 Responses to Walking in the rains…

  1. Neha says:

    I don't know whether to be happy or vague.


  2. RGB says:

    I'm looking for the 'like' button 😛


  3. Guria says:

    Be happy, it's always ever momentary.. 🙂


  4. Guria says:

    the words do fine… =)
    thank you so much!!


  5. Bikramjit says:

    hmmmm Here's wishing that these good moment are with you all the time .. so the moment of pain never comes ever

    lovely poem ..


  6. Guria says:

    thank you 🙂 it's good to see you here, as always!


  7. I don't know if one word suffices but here it is-beautiful.


  8. Anonymous says:

    Well written dear… even in the air of pain, the memories of smile is a true treasure. Loved it 🙂



  9. Guria says:

    How sad it is, that all that beauty always is born of pain… Thanks Aditya, good to see u as always 🙂


  10. Guria says:

    You are absolutely right… thank you!


  11. Hey this is a beautiful poem…nice one


  12. Sach! says:

    This is so awesome. Loved it.
    I would love it if you could translate the newer post (bengali poem) 🙂


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